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Old 08-25-04, 11:41 AM   #5
Ms.Skillz4daze
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I can tell you got a badddd flow.

Dig this though. Have you ever thought about typing your lines together, as to not make them seem like poetry but more like a flow, using slashes perhaps?

Like this:

Don’t play with fools must obey the rules/ or leave the club/
Can’t squeeze and hug a girl in here you better freeze your love/
Habits, thugs don’t grab it in here, you can flow reminiscing /but
No kissing/ my job in despair while music revolve the air by cuts/
From DJ as a club manager I’m a scrub damager that kick butts
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