This was an aight drop, found it difficult on the first verse, as syllables werent rhymed properly and it made the rhyme scheme quite choppy, the second verse was more steady, I think more multies throughout and it woulda smoothened your flow... The concept was a bit overplayed and some of the lines were distant, you had some powerful lines and it coulda helped by delivering a well thought message... The wordplay was aight, punches were thrown and some imagery was used, which is good... This was a very solid drop, and ya mos def showed your potential in all areas, look forward to seeing more from you... Aint bad at all, keep writing and elevating...

Peez...