Voted For: String9487

string you get this
"ya structure so fucked i didnt bother readin ya verse"
don't know why but i liked it...
your pumpkin seed line was aight too
you came with clean structure and decent flow some nice punches

Daking you had a messed up structure everything all together like that makes it choppy tah flow but that dawsons creek line was aight but some of your lyrics a sortah play'd
some punches but they were hit and miss

keep workin at it both stay up stay active VOTE OFTEN

Honest and EXPLAINED votes needed in my battle VS. LADY FIYA

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