I think you gotta change your subject matter man, aint feeling the whole "pimping game", cos its hard to believe and if ya are doing it, iLL..... but I still dont believe ya... The flow was simplistic, lacced mulites and power, it was like a Nelly spit, ya need something with substance, something real... Wordplay was hardly there, maybe a few mentionings here and there, but I think ya need ta elevate a lot more, everyone got the potential, you jus gotta do it... Keep spitting and elevating...

Peez...