Yeh it was simple man, ya know your elevation is in process so keep spitting and elevating... You jus need to think of a decent subject matter and spit your thoughts, think problems in the world, a days experience, whatever you feel comfortable with and release on the page... More multies and internal rhymes needed here, play around with your style and develop one unique, text is different from mic, as everyone can see your broad outlines, so show em your skill... Work on your vocab, you can spit more words then that, and checc your syllables while using vocab... Incorporate some wordplay and metaphors and deliver what you wanna spit, you got potential man, jus keep dropping ish, you will shine one day...

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