Voted For: â€- ArchAngel â€-

damn this was a great topical battle but ima have to give this one to Arch ..

arch-you had mad feelin going into your piece.. you really had me wanting to read more and thats strange cuz i hate reading..lol...you really had some nice emotions..overall this was a beutiful piece from you

one-man-band- you had an okay piece but your feelins werent hitten as hard as arch, you had sin flow the structure wasa alittle off..and so was the imagery but overall it was okay...