Work on
structure make it more realistic like you were really rapping
Vocab.. is too basic.. add a few fancy word's in.. but dont try being a nerd.
Multi's increase your flow sometime's put a few of them
.. and rhyme scheme

It was`nt worth reading 4/10.

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