amature battle..
::Run down::
Metaphors- you two were pretty much tied in this battle, but shellz pulld away slightly with the fact he had one at least every two lines..
Rhyme scheme-Dirtboy took it..Flowd better, an went with rhyme more than twice with one perticulare word
Punchs- Shellz came harder with his punchs..couldnt been ALOT better tho
Vocab- Dirtboy, but slightly.. couldnt been better on both
Now it might seem as tho you guys are tied, but if you know anything about battles the punchs take up about 40-50% of a good battle verse,
Quote:
my words are like vicks cause I surely clear and rock yo SNOTbox,
you must of been drinkin cause all you do is take drunk shots,
Ima punch tou and Ko you right from this laptop~ streight to yo DELL,
so go to tha beach next time.. cause thats tha only time you can get shelzz,
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best lines in the both verses i thought..
vote=Shellz
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