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Old 08-25-04, 02:00 PM   #10
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Voted For: â€- ArchAngel â€-

WOW, this was a great topical, both of you......
you both had nice personal touches and style on this topic,
but i have to say arch, your verse was like song, i liked the chorus idea, and the way you set it up, you are a very vivid and descriptive writer, i enjoyed reading both verses though, and i appreciate both concepts, but arch's verse was written beautifully and the opening was very emotional for me, i can relate to this...............ima vote:arch
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