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The Tru Force Of Rap
From: In Bed With Your Girls Mouth On My Dick |
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IP:
Quote:
yo issues your barz is weak I cut them wit hacksaws,
and thats all your raps like tylenol~ cause people sleep on you,
wait..... they noddin off~ Ima bout to make you Hot wit this sawed-off,
Iam Raw dawg you not mature enough for me wait till yo balz fall,
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good multis in there..
::BreakDown::
Punchs-SHelZZ took it.. came harder
Vocba-Issues, way better
Rhyme scheme- tie, both were kinda either choppy or over drawn..
Metaphors-SHelZZ
vote= SHelZZ explained ^^^ there
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