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~Break Bred or Play Dead~
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IP:
Voted For: String9487
Im str8 all cash like banks/ I a have u droppin in da gutta like pin at da bowlin rink/ I put u 6ft deep where ya casket go/ pull ya azz from da ranks like i pull my doe/ put dis beef in a bag like chop meat/ dump ya body in da river like dawsons creek/ im way ya rank cuz im walkin tall/ ia cut u open haveu stitched up like chucky da doll/ I aint em but ia have u impatiently waitin/ ia stab u in ya face more dan freddy did jason/2 u man im trouble and i aint talkin bout da board game/ i a leave ya azz freezin like a cold tray of ice chains/ ya lyrics get flushed like a toilet cuz im shittin on u/ treat u like a diaper have my little son pissin on u/
Punches were ok and ya wordplay could have been better but it was hard 2 follow ya flow cuz ya strucuter was fucked u cant come wit a drop in that kinda format cuz u will lose everytime
i can't give u props, cuz i dont support lessers
did nigga aint "daking' look more like the court jester
eh yo dis nigga need to fall back
i'll snap, ya skull cracked, swollen head in ya balll cap
u can get merked if u show up fine
its like i regurgitate raps teh way i "throw up" rhymes
i'll load the pump, when i dump u bleed
ya whole head will crack open like pumpkin seeds
u can't rap , dont flow please stop
my "punches" r haymakers n urs is cheap shots
i'll make u dissappear wit a mask n some gloves
dis lil upstart must b askin for slugs
Ima end this right now, u shoulnta have started fam
only place u need ot '"drop" is in the garbage can
ima read my own raps hopefully i'll b less board
only time u b "daking" is on chessboards
dog ya flow fell thru
u aint gangsta, the only thing on ya waiste is ya belt loops
cuz u so wack, people gon b sleepin wats worse
ya structure so fucked i didnt bother readin ya verse
u just a lightweight, fall back iima toss this man
make the "daking" FOLD cuz he done loss this hand HAAAAAA
Ya punches were a lil played but they still got the whole punch scenario u was tryin 2 get across ya wordplay could of been a lil better but u still had good chose of vocab complexity was a lil iffy but other than that it was a good job nice structure and flow that boosts it time's a 100
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