Tickle My Sloth
From: Wolverhampton, England |
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IP:
Leave this kid thinking it’s Christmas cause I’ve already got this battle under wraps/
Your like nas stealing your thug stories from real gangstas/
Posting your verse is useless like playing a game of basketball with out all the playas/
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That shit right there was prolly the worst from Dirt boys verse and even that was above his opponents shit! Good attempts from both but dirt-boy69 took this with the flow and wordplay, close battle though, kinda hard to call.Keep it up you two, and my advice for Dirtboy is...up your vocab son because right now its very basic, but dont over-do it liuke N-Demik, you gotta get the correct balance.Try hooking up a thesaurus, thats always by my comp when im battling-it helps!!
And shorten down on your bars, try to make 'em the same lenght if you can because it helps with the flow, and try to put more multi's in your shit, i dont like using them actually but thats what people look mfor in verses....
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