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Old 08-25-04, 09:00 PM   #15
fluidmoon
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Voted For: The Black Plague

nice battle fellas,
plague~your opener was strong, i liked the credit card line, it was funny, so was the structure line, you had harder punches in this battle, although you should work on ya structure,but overall you used good multies as well,ima give this to you because of punches..
paramik~nice verse, good structure, but i dont think you had as hard punches here as BP,good flow tho, you both did well
vote:black
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