View Single Post
Old 08-25-04, 09:37 PM   #30
In-Vision
Out-Spoken
 
In-Vision's Avatar
 
Posts: 2,011
From: memphis
IP:

Voted For: Phantom

"Jono" (you know) this battle is useless, im destined to win...
fuck u how i did ur mom, how did u think u got kin?...

not feelin this too much...the first line was tight but i didn't like what you used below it..

i kill u on every level: metas, structure, and personals...
piss on you bathroom style and slam your face into a urinal..

dope

ill win this battle easily, its a walk in the park..
have this "kid" scared of "phantoms" like hes alone in the dark...

clever way to hype your name

my "cool" flow rams up your ass, im "chaffin" with "ices"...
u try rappin but it blows up in your face like safety devices*...

good punch

theres many a word to describe you: biter, herb, jocker...
you in this "game" for "kicks" and u have nonexistant "punches", kid try soccer!...the kicks and soccer line I've heard a lot before....so this was just aiight

your "flyweight" "flows" just foat away like "mist"**...
you aint shit, just a tally to my k.o. list...

very dope closer...




your turn Jono


Aint a thug Phantom, Your as 'Straight' as you are 'Handsome'
Mixin a 'Low' "Dick-Ryder" Anthem, Fake Bitches ride 'Tandem'

Decent use of multis...pretty good opener

Quit thinkin' your 'Good', your thug 'Mentalilitys' a Mistake
Come to my 'Hood' nigga, get dropped like a Whoo kid mixtape

Didn't like this

You Couldnt win this shit, If I got Kiss to Prewrite your script
With the Lox on Lock, even Dj Quik cant spin your Shit 'Mix

This was ok...first line was a lot better than 2nd


A tribal warrior, always come to his battle more than Equipped
Even if i choked n got hit, my 'Spit' alone would beat your shit


It was good..and wasn't at the same time...just because it was clever in the sense spit comes out when you get hit...but it's your "spit" that is what your using against him anyways...

Aint seen a thug, come out Cali since Ez' came outta Compton
If your the next generation, The west has begun to soften

not good...this isn't about who's a bigger gangster

This aint a military camp faggat, wit every 'head' needin cockin
this assault im not stoppin, Doin Circles around em' as if I was C-walkin...

not a good closer....

over all...i didn't like your verse too much...you have talent I can tell....your decent with multis...but I was diggin Phantoms verse much more..no hate....much respect...please return the favor...


http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=144336
__________________
Seek & Destroy
We have fun in my basement







Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate.


"watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox


The I.H.C.J.S.F.M.T.R.H.P.M.M.W.T.S.M.S.I.T.F.F.W.A.S. O Crew
Send a message via AIM to In-Vision Send a message via MSN to In-Vision Send a message via Yahoo to In-Vision