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Old 08-25-04, 09:55 PM   #11
Logic The Goonie
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Voted For: WildFire

verbal abuse-not very hot. punches were kinda herbish structure was off, didnt seem like you were very focused, i mean in the middle of the verse you said "erm" which means you lost interest in ur verse and i therefore did also. one word can do a lot. overall the wordplay and personals were the best part of ur verse....6/10

Wildfire-i didnt like how you split up certain parts of ur verse but i understand. good flow and structure but the punches were overall just ok. some were real good but like 45% of it seemed like you werent focused either.put more personals in ur flow but that doesnt mean overload it with personals. but i really like the flow and wordplay......7.75/10

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