Voted For: Paramik

yo dis goes to paramik n heres how

Paramik- had good strcuture but u need to stop wi tthe paragragh thing dawwg, umwordplay 7/10, vocab 7/10
struc 6/10, flo 8/10, punches 6/10

the black plague- u had good metas n u had those punches but it broke down like this wordplay 6/10, vocab 8/10, struc 7/10 flo 4/10 n den punches 5/10

v/paramik

yalll return da votes

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