Voted For: String9487

String-Punchlines were sick...
i got u all shook like i hold dat nine
if fu was "upfront" then its throwback time
u must b confused wit all ya wrong way raps
cuz diss nigga mo "pussey" than the Broadway Cats
my punches smack hard while u hurtin for hits
u a RAP waiter, cuz u workin for "tips"
dog, ima laugh, cuz ya raps all jokes
when spit, like Daffy Duck, tha-tha-thats all folks

That shit was really the best part to me, you killed him with that part alone.. But by the way.. It was porky pig who said thats all folks, lol

Upfront-I wasn't really impressed by your punchlines, most of them i ddin't even understand and that was if the even made sense.. no hate, you were puttin punchlines backwards
put s0o many holes in ya chest ya start ta look like spongebob/
ya blood will rise start ta make ya lungs throb/

If you put the spongebob part as the second bar and changed the first it woulda been better

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