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Voted For: 4Blood2Hound0
this battle was a KO from mad punches to tha head.
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"Lets battle" I guess its somethin im willin to try/
Lemme be "up front".. you not sick, you just livin a lie/
Fuck this, I got 3 knives, 2 guns, who want what/
Oh look! Its a guy kissin booth! And look whos "up front"/
it was a wrap just after those too but the structure was better and the creativity was on point. Upfront ur structure was fucked up lol u need to make it so it flows better n try to b more creative and use some better vocab
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