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Old 08-26-04, 03:25 AM   #1
M&rk
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Voted For: ProVerse

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=143415
return the vote or on my e-dubz battle in my sig.

ummm... ya'll should prewrite instead of lookin like newbs.

but w/e heres what i saw.

proverse-
one good punch.
arived in RV i april,still words couldn't spring into action

.... the rest of your verse i wasn't feelin at all

jpoll- after readin your verse i thought u'd lose for sure, but anyway heres what i DID like.......... um scratch that i just re read your verse and u dont have a single line to match proverse's one line i liked.

little tip.... dont "straight key your shit", wordplay punches win battles and u can't jus key those u gotta think 'em threw.

this some honest shit, return wit the same honesty please.
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