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Old 08-26-04, 04:21 AM   #6
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This was feedback posted for e-dubz

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yomkid oyu came hard thru the whole flow...good shit kid......just try to work on oyur structure alil.......but good flow i think you got this......nice punches and coo meta4s......and your ending was hella nice.......good shit....
8/10

line 2: im a low ryder, your 'dubz'...no fuckin wonder i own you..................^^^^ that was coo but you killed it in the end of that line but good thinking ...kid you got real potiential...good shit......you was coming with heat till you started spitten those played rhymes but good shit.....the CUMN meta4s and shit are fgettin played...that british shit was aight.......not really any good shit..i can tell you guys both tried your best...this is gonna be a even battle....8/10
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