Like all's said already, great depth, amazing visualisation. Actually thought you must have some relative experience to have written this... you're fifteen years only, that makes this piece a piece of artwork. Well developed inner vision. The stuff of great writers. Listen to me goin' on like some old Hinglish Teacher n all, LOL, but I'm seriously impressed with this. August: in, no doubt about that. Still haven't figured out how to work this forum so I hope my vote gets counted here. i tried once and it knocked me back.

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One eyE on the TV and the other one under it, punctured, bust, and gathering dust, teeth like rust, skin like piecrust, nose all bust ugly as fuck, but still Ol Spoke eyE be Righteous and Just.