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Old 08-26-04, 11:24 AM   #9
chamorropit
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Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

I Can Achieve More In One Punchline Than This Fool Can Achieve In A CONCERT../
I'm Stompin The Shit Out You An Only Thing You See Is The Soul Of My CONVERSE../

OoO wee dis line wuz sic sHoTTaBoY took dis one his structure is good easy to read his wordplay flowed nice

System Crasher u started off kinda slow wit no pl's but ur last line hit hard but sHoTTaBoY jus wuz more consient wit his flow but u got lyrics tho
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