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Old 08-26-04, 12:03 PM   #13
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I'ma Take It To ThE 'Wild West' Days n Pop A Hand-Gun n Leave This cowboy DANCIN/
I'm Built Like a 'ROCK' n kats declare me the 'PEOPLES CHAMPION'

dis line wuz a good pl i feel sHoTTaBoY took dis one it wuz longer den his oppent's da olympics line i saw b4 but u had more lyrcial content den youngd

youngd ur structure wuz good u had sum aite pl's but u jus didnt get any personals to me but if u wud of wrote more u cud hav hit sum better lines
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