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Old 08-26-04, 04:11 PM   #15
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ecko.....you get my vote here man....you had betta punchlines that hit harder then drag`on......your vocab was betta here to which gave you betta wordplay......personals werent really nuffin special....ya opener was ok it prolly coulda been worded betta.same with ya closer too

drag~on...ya verse coulda used some work....to me it seemed like you repeated personals.....ya punchlines didnt stand out to me...seemed like you didnt really use good word play and no vocab.....so you need to improve in those areas...ya verse was too simple..ya opener wasnt good to me....and ya closer it wasnt hard but if you woulda worded it betta i guess it woulda been ok...
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