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Old 08-26-04, 04:15 PM   #6
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Originally Posted by XxXtayve
iight yo...this one is from 1 of my battles....the dude still gatta get online and drop but fuck it...ima showing this as a try out..........









Intensify Effect?..thats how u getting murcked by this oustanding VET..and I’m doing this with no REGRETS (1)
son take this Spit as a 1000 holes in ya CHEST + bloods all over ur VEST,next time think twice b4 ge’in on the NET... (2)
723 POSTS..no change..you still a JOKE,you'r lines remind me of a gay in a BLOW..you would be "booed" at if this was a SHOW (3)
you aint in no CREW..nigga get a fucking CLUE..u suck and u SCREWED.cant u find somethingelse to DO? (4)
you puches r just like and old man MOUTH...how u xpeact to hurt me when u aint even got a teeth to brag ABOUT? (5)
he dosend even know wherre the fuck he FROM...you battleing me is like putting a pole up ya tinny bum BUM..(6)
8lines and im leaving peeps asking your wherre about...y'all gatta know he's right herre in the cats mouth.. (7)
i done with BUSTING YOU..next time i bitch slap think twice 'cos i'd keep CRUSHING YOU..now lets see if this spit aint worth saying "I’M SONING YOU"? (8)

iight....the rhymes r in CAP....


4)he aint in no crew and in his profile he didn’t put whats he does..no work …nothing

6)in his profile he didn’t put where he from

peace

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^When You Tryin Out You Should "HAVE" To But Your 'WORDS' That Rhyme Togetha In "CAPS" ... - Fucks Up Your Whole Flow.. And I Really Aint Feelin It

-Work On Structure
-Work On Wordplay
-Work On Vocabulary
-Work On Your Stretched Lines... (Etc; Etc ...

(Good Luck)

Imma Say (Out)
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