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Old 08-26-04, 04:28 PM   #40
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Voted For: [~*Lady Fiya*~]

lady fiya.......ima have to give you this one even tho i like both verses.....i like the way you used metaphores in here....not directly sayin what your talkin bout but describin shit that made u think....ya wordplay was decent..prolly coulda been betta...ya opener was good...i like dat closer too...dis was a good verse from you..

Winc...you had a good verse too.....it was kinda hard to decide but i had to go wit that fact that all your punches really hit hard in the beginnin of ya verse..it seem like you fell off at the end to me....ya opener was ok too...closer just seemed like u got lazy lol...but like i said it seemed like you slacked....

Lady fiya took this becuz of her clever use of metaphores...and she stayed strong throughout her whole verse.can yall hit up my battle against mic-wrecker in elevated plz..

i took the time to vote in yall battle so do the same for me holla
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