Voted For: shake-spear

ok ok

1st off wow green you wrote TOO many lines
you shouldnt have wasted dat many lines dawg
but that shows you enjoy rappin but sorry...

shake takes it

both strcuture was off
but his flowed better
and had punches and wordplay

so he wins

vote/shake-spear

retun the favor pleeeeeeaaaaaaaaase
dont ignore this like everybody else
and you get money for votin so return it

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