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Old 08-26-04, 05:29 PM   #9
~Lady Fiya~
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Voted For: Street Legend

sorry mic-wrecker but ya lines were a lil' too stretched.. structure given to Street Legend, vocab- mic-wrecker although u need to have them flow correctly, u got that topic, flow- Street Legend cuz of good word usage.. that's a +..

the opener:
my record portrays a false depiction, dont get it twisted
Claimin you free as ever....not while my bars place u under restriction
^Street a good way to start off the battle, u took that category also..

closer however:
and tha's vividly how imma paint this picture//
heat cha like toast an throw u out an central park for them birds ta get cha//
^mic- wrecker nice, watch the structure tho, it can really ruin the purpose of ya flow..

Both of u had nice drops but based on what i mentioned before plus the category of punches- which Street took also.. that's the reason my vote leans more towards his side.. and no hate, either... pure vote.. PLZ use the tips i'm just helpin' y'all out so y'all don't get screwed for sumthin' small... watch how u word things ppl..
i'm out!
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