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Old 07-05-02, 12:15 PM   #9
RhetoriX
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This was a decent spit, it was tidy for a keystyle, the wordplay was aight, jus didnt think it had any substance... The rhythm was steady, multies were shown throughout, more internal rhymes woulda smoothened everything up... Vocab was balanced, and there were some decent knowledge terms... More wordplay and punches, coulda made this even better, woulda come across somehow... It was decent though, try spitting over subject matter, solid... Keep elevating...

Peez...
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