Seemed like a simple drop, didnt really have anything for me... The rhyme scheme was simplistic, more multies needed and structure your flow... Liked the vocab it was working throughout, more wordplay and punches needed, some metaphors woulda changed the perspective... It was working in some places, aint bad for a quicc free... I think you gotta push ypur wordplay a lot if your gonna drop pieces like this... Keep spitting and elevating...

Peez...