Voted For: Paramik

you get my vote here.....

ya punches made a difference in this battle....your personals was good too.....even tho ya punches were betta then his you coulda made them betta...ya opener was ok...second line of ya opener was weak....ya closer needs improvement too...wordplay was ok .. but still good verse....

Empire....ya verse needs some help dog...ya verse just seemed so simple to me...personals were aight coulda made them come betta by usin betta wordplay wit them...and ya third bar...i couldnt seem to rhyme that i might just be illiterate....ya opener coulda been way betta....as well as ya closer....ya punchlines were just weak....elevate....

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