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Bangs like bikini attol
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Voted For: WildFire
This was very close. Ingeneous mind had a pretty solid verse, it told an alrite story that was fairly easy to follow and ended pretty good also. I dont think it was till near the end of wildfires verse that he got the win from..
The connection he made between the viewpoint he was writing actually being peer pressure was what cemented it in my opinion.
You both could use a lil elevation, mind you could prolly go a lil deeper into your throughts during the party and wildfire, you could benefit from using transitions in your verse.
vote-wildfire...
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