your gettin a lil betta man..........more tips

you have to really be in touch wit the beat.......this beat is kinda slow i guess......so instead of pausin in every line write more lyrics....cuz pausin just makes everybody sound dumb to me....i told u before u gotta make ya shit sound betta....if u mess up dont just go pass it.do it agin and again til you get everything perfect...i heard u mess up on ya first line......you didnt say scream u said....scweem...work on dat yo....and get ya wordplay up ya shit is still simple....work on that stuff man....and somethin else.....when we come into the thread....we kno ya name stop sayin ya name all the time...like in the battle i had wit u...you said ya name like every other line man stop doin that..so no hate again just givin u tips

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