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Old 08-27-04, 01:27 AM   #30
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Voted For: Paramik

para's verse had alot more content n was flowing really well with nice structure that helped alot average punches for the most part your rhyme scheme was more prodominant in this battle...empire your punches were alright but ya had one that did'nt rhyme at all ta me(3) structure could be better but i liked you opener but the syllable count was'nt very equal..nice rhyme scheme on that one though...overall i gotta give this ta para jus cause of more consistent punches that were deliverd with good flow.....good battle..keepin it honest..
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