i quite liked that.....

the direction it was taking was nice
some good emotion
ok flow
sum multies in there

structure was off tho
simple vocab...

from that id say u got potential on the topical/poetry side
u need more complexity..up ya vocab n metas...

if u do txt battles,holla wit sum links or spit...

wot u think dml?........theres potential i think....
maybe holla back wit sumthin harder?

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