Voted For: Mad Dog

mad dog had beta emotion,more depth and feeling.
structure was also better,i felt magic u ruined ur flow with the lil interludes between verses.this makes the reader hve to stop and think.gud idea,but restructure it 4 beta flow.....


havin said that i dnt consider struc that important but mad had the better vocab,multies.n general rhymes....
overall u both came good,but i was feelin the depth from mads more....
both keep elevating........

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