Voted For: aberrant

aight abberant took this with more complex punches n a flow that delivered them well,structure was better also.some filler lines to me but they were good setups for the punch ...
words...way too simple srry man but alot of your punches missed in my eyes n your flow was off on your opener i think you forgot a word n that threw me right off in the beginning,
also the lil~finisher~qoute was annoyin jus thought id tell ya for future battles it throws off the flow n doesnt go well in a verse....................

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