Voted For: DangerousMyndLunatic
Nice battle and very close.
DML- Flow was nice, structure was nice 2 and vocab was decent. Your punches all hit pretty hard but you could do with a little bit of wordplay thrown in. The chronic line was nice, made me laugh a lil lol. A few personals wouldnt have gone a miss either. Any way, nice verse, keep doin ya thing....
creaTivitie- Your lil intro thing put me off from the start, its kinda herbish. But your verse wasnt acctually bad. A few nice punches and a bit of nice wordplay with the ovaries line, that shit was nice. But vocab cud do with a bit of enhancment. All in all it was a good verse just lackin a bit of that killer quality. Nice shit tho
So my vote goes to DML, good battle though
Also please can you vote FAIRLY on my battle with Word Processor, been slept on for a while and needs finishing. Please take the time out to vote, i did....
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