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Old 08-27-04, 03:51 PM   #38
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Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle

~Flooze~

You couldn’t get a-“head” even if you had help from Ron Jeremy…
You just trash talk but end up hiding like Oscar off Sesame*…

kinda weak punch......5/10

He tries to have a slick name all funked up snoop dogg style...
Except you sound more like J-kwon on a freestyle...

Not feelin this at all...2/10

Here's this 17 old boi about to get merked by a 14 year old...
Since your crew is 'Ill',if you 'spit' at me all I'll turn to is mold**.

What does something being ill have to do with mold? 3/10

I bet you'd like yo mamma to 'Dizzle 'n' Pat yo diK'***...
Even if you laced your verse with oil it still youldnt be slick...

the first line was a good attempt at a personal...and the bottom was ok...5/10

Read my avatar and remember the name...
My crew and I will just stomp ya flat as we continue to run the rap game...

rap isn't a game....get that through your head....4/10


~Dizzle~

Listen youngin' why you frontin'? You can't merk me/
You prolly still a virgin, and I got pussy when I was 13/

Not a very good opener...your supposed to attack him..not build yourself up..he's only 14...one year age diff..not that big of a deal...if he was like 30..it'd be a good punch...anyways...4/10

I can drop the mic dude, age don't matter, I'll fight you/
Explained your rhymes, thinkin' we must be illiterate like you/

pretty good, best punch i've seen so far 7/10

Dog you ain't moving Paul, you peeped my profile/
Prolly looked for my address to come try and get a booty call/

Not feelin this....4/10

You a fake bitch, actin' in your lame rhymes/
I'll see you nominated for a Grammy and an Oscar at the same time/

pretty good punc...another 7/10

Bullets do more than graze, fool, I amaze fools/
So shut the fuck up and go back to grade school/

that was decent too...but the fact that he's 14..and is probably still in grade school..made it not so strong....but 7/10 because the rhyme scheme was good...

over all....I know both of you could of done a lot better...stop sleepin on eachother..thats how battles are lost folks...anyways..


Flooze: 19/50
Kid P-dizzle:29/50

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