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Old 08-27-04, 03:55 PM   #12
aberrant
Flyweight
 
Posts: 175
From: Nottingham, England
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Voted For: !Mc Merc!

kinda weak battle but Merc takes it

Both verses lacked any kinda wordplay or metaphors. It was all basic rhyming. Both flows were good but Merc took it easily with his punches.

DOT.....im way too advanced haters dont get what i say
well imma keep it simple yall niggas is gay
/\/\ that was WEAK as hell, improve your punches

and also, DOT, you seemed to have used the word MERC too many times in you verse.

Anyways you've both got potential, just take a lil more time and be a lil more creative

So my vote goes to Merc for overall better punches
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