Voted For: Phantom

Phantom...
First bar was a good metiphore....and a funny one...
second bar was kinda self hype.
The last bar was OK. the last line saved the BB gun line.

Shotta.
get off the thug spray ur rounds at him shit.
Be original. And Use more wordplay.

Hit this wit an honest vote. thanks
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=145580

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