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Originally Posted by BrOTheRP.A.R.A.
lol man you need some help yer stucture is wack lol vocab is what you need flow was ok 4 storyline 5 lol vocab 2 peace 3/10
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LOL I critiqued this other rhyme she had (and trust me, this one is even better than that other crap she spit) and she wanted to start bangin' her head against her computer screen typing out b*tch and ho and slut like a mad woman.LOLOLOLOLOL But what can we expect from a stressed out female internet gangsta who is more than likely typing her "hard knock life" battles from her Mommy and/or Daddy's computer?
