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Old 07-05-02, 09:58 PM   #2
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....Very Nice drop, Very nice... I was feeling the whole script, everything was nice, what I loved the most was the vocabulary, I have never seen some of the words, but that's good, because I can someday use them in one of my verses . Some of the lines I really liked were...
"I Take A Long Gaze At Tha Air As My Life Dilatorily Decreases..
Each Second Is Like An Ancient Song Inside Broken Into Pieces.."
"Or An Intersteller Company Fleeing From A Haste Searing Shuttle..
Tha Moment I Was Added To This Oxygen I Knew I Was In Trouble.."
"Following Tha Light As It Travels At Speeds My Eyes Cant Contest..
Towards Death, Absent Was Tha Only Word I Engraved In Context.."
"Mirrors Only Reflect Tha External Happiness If You Like Smiling..
Inner Child Consistantly Crying As My Emotions Keep On Lying.."
and...
"Forced To Make Unethical Choices, In Lifes Multiple Choice Quiz..
An Outcast To Societies Raising Is How This "Felon" Was Labeled.."-
One question though...Was there a pattern...the start there is a mass confusion of Vocabulary and then as it goes further down the vocabulary shortens, or was it just Coincidence?

Overall...Your the vocab king, loved all of it, 1ne.
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