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Old 08-27-04, 09:06 PM   #14
BlackMagik
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i liked the hook and the first verse, atleast most of the first verse...but some of it was a lil hard to follow...second verse sunk way below the first verse's level...didnt flow, no vocab or wordplay...but keep droppin gurl!! just elevate a lil bit...5/10
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