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Old 07-05-02, 10:27 PM   #4
monkeypoet
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hey dude, ur back... ne way, nice peice, i liked this one alot... the flow was awesome, the vocab was good, and the emotions were raw and thouro... fave lines:

See the fire run through my veins
Hear the torturing sounds
Lists of solutions where nothings gained
I can watch my life go down

nice peice again... keep it flowin
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