Voted For: Phantom

Aight big props to both of yall...

Phantom pretty nice verse man, "black folks at liquor stores"...
that flat out had me rollin lol. I liked how you put effort into your wordplay as well, I think a lot of people only put emphasis on punches, where as wordplay is a major factor as well. Good creativity there, and the verse flowed pretty well, a lil choppy here and there...but that could just be how im reading it. Overall it was just a really good verse.

Shottaboy...Im not sure why you didnt go 6 lines, in a battle this short you need all you can get just like your last line. Your flow kinda fell off with each of your lines being shorter in the first bar, then your 2nd bar you didnt get in your whole 6 lines I think that hurt you a lil bit. Your punches really werent hittin that hard...just be a lil more creative with the way you write. Put a little more wordplay in as well to set your punches up better.