a.k.a Sonic
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Voted For: Phantom
Ok, Shottaboy's first bar really didn't rhyme to start off.. victim and phantom won't work.. phantom had an okay opener and he followed with some pretty okay lines. phantom also had better stucture with no really stretched lines and he wrote more to give for more content.. so honestly, my vote goes to the phantom for punchlines and structure..
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