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Old 08-28-04, 11:54 AM   #11
Turnheads
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From: Califoolya
This was feedback posted for jewpride

IP:

I think jewpride got it.

He had more heavy punches, the flow was a little better not too simple, and put together nicely.

This was hot
"/ ill murk this dude leave him hung with a lynched appearance/ amputate his arms so that way he couldnt lift his spirits (KO)"
and
"ya lines are hopeless i've misleaded your dreams/ like elementary math tests your defeated wit ease"