i think you have some buddie's here.

because you were doing one sylable rhymin . . which is not impressive for example
real-rap
more-crack
shit & it?
vet & reckless?

this is not anything close to being the dopest piece.

i'll leave feedback when i'm not too tired
Can someone break this down in .. motion . . wordplay . multi's flow.. vocab..?
6.4/10. average . . please leave feed back not " this was hot , yo "
it's getting on my nerve's.

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