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Old 08-28-04, 07:45 PM   #10
M&rk
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Voted For: sHoTTaBoY



Look Nigga....now What I Spit Is Crazy I'll Make Ya Ass Holla Boy,
And Leave Ya Ass With A Loss Cause I'm A Hotta Boy//
^^^personal, but not hard punch, only thing of yours i liked at all though

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shotta-
...I Got Guns That'll Leave You 'HOLY' Like The Good Book../
I'ma One Man Mobb n Got Bitches Like You 'SHOOK'../
Theres A 'SLIM' Chance Of Jackin Me But If You Did ''I just Wouldnt Give A Fuck''../
^^^not too hot but decent wordplay, i dont like name play of famous people but its better than what the other cat did.

SHOTTA had more punches i liked.... try makin every line a decent punch and less fillers like.
You Should Never Have Romped Cause It Was Over Too FAST../
You Passed Out From The Font n I Didnt Even Have To BLAST../

still enough to win this one, but elevate both of you.

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